My AoG story pitch

This is just the raw idea

- a mage of zamorak named Zaristolas Rensmarotal
- Despises the accursed power that he was forced to receive
- Watches a battalion of hellhounds destroy a defenseless village
- Yells at the general leading the army "this is murder!" "no, this is war, learn your place young man!" etc.
- assasinates a demon general for reason above and a reason i have not decided on
- joins Saradomin and story continues from there

I am open to ideas and possibly a different name for the dude.
Any help is gladly accepted.

A neat idea would be for him to gradually grow eviler and eviler the longer he is the army, until his soul is purged of evil by Saradominist mages when he joins them.

Be careful of word limit is suppose, and please have some substance ( Dont start the story from a "fringed end", that was the reason Mod Mark gave me for not winning the deities competition)

sounds good, hope u pop out some nice story